Update

The below poem has recieved a lot of negative reviews, I think I'll need to look into re- writing this

Contest entry Crimson Twilight

Mask of terror

A once pretty face, hides it’s terrible fate

Dark terror seen in eyes of baby blue

Red weils still sting after all these years

Her revenge was sweet planned over many years

The deal she had to make sealed her fate

Her victims knew nothing, revenge, for a baby out of the blue

The sun drenched field,framed by skys of blue

This was to be her fate after all these years

As the knife sinks deeper, She remembers her child, to die her fate

To suffer this welcome fate under blue skies after all these years

This week

This week in WDC's (writing.com)10th Birthday. as part of this there are a number of contests running. I have select to do a 10 line poem with the following prompt. King of Parties.

As I said earlier this is a great site.. please come get involved. The other great thing about the site is that it is free.

The other contest I will be entering is the Crimson Twilight poetry contest this is a monthly contest, the prompt this month is a masked girl in a sun drenched field.