The below poem has recieved a lot of negative reviews, I think I'll need to look into re- writing this
Sunday, September 12, 2010
Sunday, September 5, 2010
Contest entry Crimson Twilight
Mask of terror
A once pretty face, hides it’s terrible fate
Dark terror seen in eyes of baby blue
Red weils still sting after all these years
Her revenge was sweet planned over many years
The deal she had to make sealed her fate
Her victims knew nothing, revenge, for a baby out of the blue
The sun drenched field,framed by skys of blue
This was to be her fate after all these years
As the knife sinks deeper, She remembers her child, to die her fate
This week
This week in WDC's (writing.com)10th Birthday. as part of this there are a number of contests running. I have select to do a 10 line poem with the following prompt. King of Parties.
As I said earlier this is a great site.. please come get involved. The other great thing about the site is that it is free.
The other contest I will be entering is the Crimson Twilight poetry contest this is a monthly contest, the prompt this month is a masked girl in a sun drenched field.
As I said earlier this is a great site.. please come get involved. The other great thing about the site is that it is free.
The other contest I will be entering is the Crimson Twilight poetry contest this is a monthly contest, the prompt this month is a masked girl in a sun drenched field.
Some info about me
I have started many blogs to date but I have never stuck with it, this time I think I will, as i am using it as a writing exercise.I am a member of www.writing.com, a great place to go for all writers regardless of skill level. it provides opportunities for new writers to get their work out there and many many writers will be online to provide feedback and encouragement.
Although I see myself as a horror writer, I do enjoy entering the competitions on the site, and I do so regularly, and I think over the last month or so I have made some improvements, I am by no means a good writer yet, I do however want to go that way and over the next however long I will post updates on my progress and some of my work.
I would just like to link www.writing.com as it is a great site to write or even just to read the work. I also want to point out it is not a stuffy site, people enjoy themselves and don't take themselves too serious. Please come a long join in rate peoples work and have fun
Although I see myself as a horror writer, I do enjoy entering the competitions on the site, and I do so regularly, and I think over the last month or so I have made some improvements, I am by no means a good writer yet, I do however want to go that way and over the next however long I will post updates on my progress and some of my work.
I would just like to link www.writing.com as it is a great site to write or even just to read the work. I also want to point out it is not a stuffy site, people enjoy themselves and don't take themselves too serious. Please come a long join in rate peoples work and have fun
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